Writing Prompt

POEM STARTER

Create a narrative poem telling the story of a family heirloom, passed down through generations. Consider how its meaning and value change over time with the course of the narrative.

Writings

Token of Defeat

I hate the hands that hold me.

They have no regard for what I am. In their hands, I am not the symbol I used to be.

Nobility handled me once. They treasured me. Between their hands, I brought comfort. Behind the polished glass, I shone with warm pride. The pride of the palace. A beacon of safety. I symbolised a brutal battle won. And the re-crowning of a man we loved and respected.

Sometimes, those who walked past shed a tear. Those who had the honour of touching my precious stones stared in thoughtful wonder. Grateful sorrow. For I symbolised the lives lost for their sakes.

I felt the best when I sat, regal, upon his head. Physically, I weighed him down, but I couldn’t help feeling the atmosphere was as light as the uplifting of joy. The people who watched were awestruck. It was, and always will be, a beautiful moment for me.

But it took one day and it was all to be torn away.

The pride stripped from every inch of the kingdom. And everything flipped to a horror story.

I still remember when fire flooded the hall. I watched what I could. Its flame tore through the heart of our palace. And under smoldering remains, grubby hands came to claim their prize. Gruesome, bloodstained faces with eyes that gleamed when they eyed my casing, no longer so safe. I wonder if, in their hot, clammy, life-wrenching hands, they felt me shudder.

Now,

They pass me down through generations of murderous rulers

and they don’t bother to clean the blood.

They call me a sign of their victory.

I have no say.

But all I feel when I feel their greedy hands on my polished metal, is the harrowing dread of defeat.

Heir Loom Generation

The Heirloom Brooch

In a dusty, wooden jewelry box,
Amidst the scent of age and loss,
Lies a brooch, with silver gleam,
A whisper of an ancient dream.

With a sapphire set in ornate gold,
It tells a tale that's often told
By grandmothers with softened eyes
Of love, of life, of long goodbyes.

It first adorned a maiden fair
In a village lost in time's long stare,
A wedding gift from her true love,
Blessed by stars that shined above.

Through trials and joys, it shone so bright
On nights of sorrow, days of light,
And when her daughter took her place,
The brooch remained, a sign of grace.

A keepsake worn on birthdays, too,
Through wars, through peace, when flowers grew
And children played in meadows green,
The brooch would witness all unseen.

It weathered storms of hurt and pain,
Saw tearful nights and danced in rain,
Yet polished clean with each new dawn,
A symbol that life must move on.

When passed to hands that trembled frail,
It whispered softly of the trail
Of ancestors who lived before,
Their laughter gone, their stories lore.

A granddaughter, with eyes of blue,
Received the brooch, and somehow knew
That in her palm she held the past,
A fragile link that still held fast.

She felt the weight of love and loss,
Of battles fought, of lines once crossed,
And as she pinned it to her dress,
She felt her heart swell with the press

Of history deep within her soul,
A story that made her feel whole,
Of mothers, daughters, dreams that soared,
Each life a bead on time’s long cord.

And so it glimmered, ever bright,
In the soft glow of the candlelight,
A silver thread through history's loom—
The cherished brooch, the prized heirloom.

Passed down through generations wide,
A silent witness, a faithful guide,
It carries tales in every fold,
Of lives entwined, of love retold.

For as long as hands can hold it near,
And voices speak with love sincere,
The brooch will shine, a treasured spark,
A light that glows against the dark.

And so it rests in that old box,
Safe within its wooden locks,
Waiting for the day it’s worn
By one more heart, to life reborn.