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The moment he saw what the chest contained, he wished he'd never opened it...but it was too late now.
Write a story that contains this line.
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The moment I saw what the chest contained, I wished I’d never opened it. . .but it was too late now. My hands shake as I stare inside it. “Damon,” I whispered, “How?” I pick up the strip of pictures. I trace my finger across Damon’s face. Tears make there way down my cheek, denting the dark earth beneath me. I choked out a sob, “Damon,” I cry, “Damon are you. . . Alive?” I close my eyes letting the picture drop to the ground. It had been years, it felt like hundreds. And all this time, I could have saved myself the pain, the tears. Damon wasn’t gone, he hadn’t died in this ocean all those years ago. My eyes open, the picture laying on the sand. I pick it up, my smile looks so real. It must have been, I wonder what it feels like to smile. For real. “Maia.” My heart skips a beat. And a smile comes to my face. “Dae?” I ask, turning around. And there he is, standing with his hands in the pockets of his jeans. “I’ve missed you, Mi,” he smiles, as I stand up running into his arms. “How are you here?” I ask as he hold me close. Damon doesn’t answer his grip becomes tighter, too tight. “Damon!” I yell, “I can’t. . .” Breathe. My vision becomes foggy, my lungs begging me for air. Damon laughs as he looks at me, that smile. My smile. It switches, I’m holding Damon, choking him. Covering his nose and mouth with my hands. His blue eyes, slowly turning black.
“Damon!” I scream, sitting up in bed. My back is soaked with sweat making my shirt stick to it. I take deep breaths, my hands on my throat. “Maia!” Mom rushes into my open bedroom door. Her tired eyes filling with fear. Anger. I feel water gathering in my eyes. “He’s gone,” I choke out, “Damon’s gone.” Mom sits on my bed, brushing my hair out of my eyes. “It wasn’t your fault,” she whispered. “I . Kil. . .killed him,” I say, my eyes meeting hers. Mom pulls me into a hug, “Damon was dying. Suffering. You did the right thing. . . You did the best thing. You put him out of his misery. . . Gave him peace.” I shake my head, my mouth open but no sound coming out. I could feel the tears in my throat begging me to cry like a little kid. Begging me to grow weak. “I killed him,” I cry, “I killed him.” Mom rocks me back and forth shushing me as she brushes her hand down my head. “It’s okay baby,” she soothes, “Damon’s okay.” “I killed him,” I whisper, “I killed him.”
“I’m coming for you,” she laughed…… I wake up, gazing into the darkness of my dorm room. The cold sweat dripping off of me like a cold rain. She gave me sleep paralysis, like a ton a bricks sitting on my body I struggled to breathe. “I won,” I thought to myself. I’ll never open another stupid chest in my life. No more dares to go into the attic alone either. I chuckled. A girlish chuckle came from my closet too….. “La La Oopsy” the entity sneered.
“The moment he saw what the chest contained, he wished he had never opened it… but it was too late now.”
His booties stuck to the viscous mess on the floor. The air was noxious with all of the typical odors you might expect in such a situation. But what was before him was anything but typical. A greenish-gray mass lay steaming and hot under the glare of the sterile light and it wriggled. Nothing was red. Nothing. Red, gore, that would have been expected in a situation such as this. And shouldn’t have been wriggling.
Frank’s gorge rose up. He tucked it back down with a stern will. His hand shook, just a bit. He thought to himself, “Why the hell did I sign up for Exploratory Alien Anatomy Lab 101?”
“I miss you.”
“I know.”
She was flustered. “‘I know?’ That’s all you have to say? ‘I know?’”
No change to his countenance, no sign of contrition, empathy. Simply, “What do you want me to say?”
“I want you to say something that let’s me know that I matter to you, that this relationship matters to you.”
“I…” He hesitated, looking at anything but her eyes. “I can’t.”
She got up from the table, feeling that the situation had too much gravity to stay seated, but quickly realized there was no where to go in the small diner, save for walking to the door. She sat back down. Angry. Frustrated. Hurt. “You can’t?” She picked up a room temperature French fry but jury played with it, didn’t eat it. “You can’t? Awesome. That’s what I want to hear. You can’t say that I matter? That our love matters? That’s… fantastic.”
“I’m not trying to hurt you. It’s just—“
“It’s just… what? What is it ‘just?’”
He finally met her gaze. “It’s just… you and I are made different. I don’t know why. We just are. It’s like, I don’t know, you’re programmed differently than I am. You need things I don’t need.”
“I need things you don’t need?! Really? You don’t need love? Commitment? Friendship? That’s bullshit. I’m so tired of this.” She became aware once again of her surroundings, of the looks they were getting from other customers, but she didn’t care; She was all-in on this, fighting hard for what mattered. To them. She knew it was crazy, maybe even detrimental, but wasn’t that what love was about? Didn’t every Grand Romance have an element of insanity?
“So, what? What do we do now?”
He was silent for too many heartbeats, but she was going to make him speak first, even if they had to sit in that booth for hours.
“I think, well, I think we have to stop seeing each other.”
“What?! You want to break up with me? Are you serious?”
“I think I am. I mean, I’ve done the calculations, added everything up, and… we just—well, we don’t make sense anymore. Sometimes, well, sometimes when people come from, you know, two different worlds, well, it can’t always be expected that things work out. It just can’t.”
“Really? Really?! We don’t make—are you kidding me right now? ‘We don’t make sense anymore?’ ‘Two different worlds?’ Who even talks like that? It’s like you’re looking for an excuse to get out of this relationship or something. Are you?”
“I should go.”
“What? No, you don’t get to just walk out. That’s not how this works. I’ve given everything to this. How can you, you don’t think that I would let you just—“
“Really, I should go.” He stands, gathering his things.
“No. No, you can’t—“
“It’s for the best.”
“Wait, no, I’m sorry. Sit back down, please. I—“
“No. I am leaving.”
The tone of her voice changed, deepened as she commanded him to stop. Something inside of her snapped. She was not who she had been only a moment before. She could hear her heartbeat, feel her peripheral vision shrinking.
He took a defiant step toward the door.
Her hand, the knife, the swift motion of the two combined, plunging the blade into his sternum—it was all ephemeral, otherworldly, disconnected—As though she was merely an observer, as shocked by the sudden violence as the other patrons in the restaurant; Sickened by it.
But it was her.
She did it.
She held the knife.
She committed the violent act.
She was now cutting him open, in spite of the voice in her mind shouting at full volume to stop!
The moment she saw what the chest contained, she wished she’d never opened it… but it was too late now; There was no turning back. It was done.
The complex, science-fictional nature of it was overwhelming. In some back corner of her adrenaline-and-rage-filled mind she could only compare it to opening the hood of a modern car or taking the panel off a PC: Wires, gizmos, servos, cables, microchips. All of it at once familiar and foreign.
She knew it would be different. He would be… different. Inside.
In her mind, she knew that what she understood as her Love—her Man—was merely a suit, a vehicle of sorts. She understood—in conceptual terms—that the life she loved, the personhood of her One-and-Only, was not the same thing as the warm, fleshy approximation that it controlled. But to see it, ‘unsheathed’ as it were, was an entirely different level of Truth.
It’s one thing to understand the theoretical nature of an alien being—one who has no recognizable form—creating a humanoid facsimile in an attempt to bond with a lower life form. It’s a completely different thing to see how it actually functions, internally.
She vomitted.
The other patrons in the diner looked like they might vomit as well, if they weren’t so thoroughly and completely dumbfounded by the suddenness of it all.
She stood, pacing, unsure of what to do next. He had been her love, her lover. But he had tried to leave her! And now the bodysuit he had been using as a means of physical interaction was laying on the floor of a diner, chest splayed open. What happened? Was this who she was? WHAT she was? Was she capable of real violence? Was her reaction to a break up to plunge a knife into the chest of the one she loved?!
Or was it something else?
Did she, at some level, see him for what he really was? Him ‘the machine,’ not him ‘the consciousness.’ Was this no more a violent crime than smacking the side of a slow computer or kicking the bumper of a smoking car before opening the hood?
She looked at ‘his’ open chest once again.
What had she done?
She collapsed to her knees, suddenly feeling the overwhelming sense that she’d committed attempted murder.
He looked at her.
“I’m so sorry. I—“ She began to crawl toward him, weeping.
He looked directly into her eyes, smiled, and opened his arms.
Wolves Hollow? That’s an odd name for a street. Is a hollow like some kind of name for a road, something fancy, Blues thought. Vito had found this AirBnB in one of the classy inner ring burbs. Drumming the solo to Rush’s Tom Sawyer on his steering wheel, Blues sat in his rusty 1999 Chevy Caviler waiting for FedEx. He looked at the nice stone house. There were two stories with big windows and shutters. There was a wraparound porch and the attic had those little Amityville Horror windows that always made Blues think those kind of houses were smiling to him. Blues surveyed the street with its daffodils and irises wishing he could walk up it, get a pricy coffee from the cafe in the town square and walk back to drink his coffee on his own sunny porch. In his mind, Blues was nodding his head to his neighbors walking along the street. A FedEx truck was up the block. Crap, Blues sprinted to the stone house and walked onto the porch. Purple sweet smelling flowers were in a flower boxes. Blues tried to think of their name as he lit a cigarette and acted calm. The FedEx truck pulled up in front of the stone house. The delivery man, a hot chick actually, climbed the porch stairs. Blues gave the hot delivery chick an appreciative look over and took the package. She gave Blues a thank you without making eye contact and was punching in info and climbing back to her truck in a fluid movement. Blues took two more puffs until the truck turned the corner. Overly casual, Blues sauntered over to his Chevy and pulled away from the curb. He flicked his cigarette out onto the pretty tree-lined street. Blues was a delivery man, too. He picked up packages at ArBnBs and hotels. Seven or eight drops a week is easy money. He drove them home and took his cut and then delivered them to his boss Vito at Vito’s club or one of his girls’ places. Vito took his larger cut and sent the rest of the cash over seas. Blues didn’t know if it was an electronic transfer, or if Vito used foreign currency or cryptocurrency. Blue knew the money went to India or Indonesia or some place on the other side of the world. It wasn’t his business to know. Blues did know where the money came from but he didn’t like to think of the grannies and old dudes tricked and bullied out of their life savings. Thinking of his one hundred dollar cut per box, he pulled into his complex’s parking lot and spat nicotine on the tarmac. Blues popped gum in his mouth and sprayed the Axe body spray that he kept in his glove compartment on his hoodie. Holding the package under his arm, Blue entered his home, his grandmother’s row house. He beelined for the basement, since Grandma had trouble with stairs it was the only room she didn’t visit. “You too grown to speak,” Grandma said. Blues rolled his eyes. “Good Morning.” He turned the basement door knob. She huffed. Blue ran over and gave her a quick peck on the cheek. “Your plate is in the oven. And you better quit smoking or get better cologne. Grandma pushed his forehead away from her. Blue took his package downstairs and then ran up for his breakfast, grits and eggs with bacon extra crispy like he liked it. In the basement properly stuffed Blues carefully opened the package. His camera was filming because Vito didn’t trust anybody. Blues didn’t think of the scammed or the scammers. Blues thought about the new kicks waiting in cart. He was just the delivery man. The moment he saw what the chest contained he wished he had never opened it. But it was too late now. Some times it was an envelop filled with cash, or a book with hundred dollar bills in the pages, or a foil-wrapped package. Once it was a bible with a note in a spidery hand asking for forgiveness. Sometimes the old people thought they were returning money given to them by mistake and they were rushing to return losing their life savings doing the right thing for the wrong people. Blues was the wrong people. Today the package contained a small square metal chest. When he lifted the lid the sides flopped open revealing a camera and a GPS and a tag that read: Property of the Pennsylvania Bureau of Investigations. Grabbing the tracker, Blues ran up the stairs, ran out of the townhouse, ran from his Grandma’s startled questions, ran to not see the look in her eyes when he gets taken away again.
It was a bright sunny afternoon and Tariq strolled through the garden in his light crisp shirt and linens looking dapper as usual. He whistled absentmindedly, and where was his mind you may wonder? It was lost in Parvati’s beautiful tresses. She lived right next to his beautiful mansion, just a few steps away. Just a few steps away but at a worlds distance. She had her eyes on him too, he could tell.
Alas his parents would never accept the house helps daughter as their own. Tariq’s heart sank and his hopes and dreams crushed in that instant.
Well, at least I can walk by her solemn little home, he thought to himself. There it was, her humble abode with a huge lock at the front door. I guess everyone is at work and Parvati isn’t back from school.
He decided to take a quick peak and landed in her backyard in a bed of weeds. As he fought his way out of the wilderness his foot hit a large chest. Very unusual he thought. Maybe I should just mind my business. Or. Let me take a quick little look I guess.
The moment he saw what the chest contained, he wished he’d never opened it….but it was too late now.
A hard push and a lifetime later he woke up in Parvati’s arms. In her coffin. And she whispered -
always had my eyes on you Tariq. Till death do us part. Or not.
Thinking back to earlier that day, the moment I saw what the chest contained I wished I’d never opened it.. but it was too late now, I wish I wouldn’t have went up to that attic, been so damn curious and now I’m stuck in a situation I can’t figure out, the moment those officers banged down that door I knew they would think I did it but I still shouldn’t have ran. I could’ve cleared my name at that moment. Now not being able to go back home, being accused of something I didn’t do.
I can’t even see my family, friends because their all being questioned. And all I have is the fifty dollars that I took out of the bank earlier that day. I need help and their is only one person I can think of who the police wouldn’t question…
Someone even my parent’s don’t know of, I tuck my head down and head towards the station knowing where it’ll lead me to, will be the best possible chance I have of clearing my name.
*This story is actually the 10 sentence writing prompt using a word from a book (I chose fleeting), because I don't have premium access I'm writing it here.
In spite of the city’s attempt at choking out the skyline with ever growing building complexes, the sky was clear and bright that morning. Hurrying home, she hummed the same tune that was blasting out of a nearby SUV and rushed across streets during breaks in traffic. The noise and chaos of the streets never bothered her though, she enjoyed the bustling sounds of a place she had always called home: New York City. She said she would be here until the day she died, because nothing could beat the adventure–and above all food–that the great city had to offer. She even quite liked the smell; damp streets and concrete, wafting chimichangas from her favorite food vendors, and she even liked the musky trash smell that was always present. While it was not everyone’s idea of paradise, it was all she had ever known; it was home. But life on the streets is not easy; as she made her way across the traffic to her cozy hole hide-away, her steps were not quick enough to avoid the oncoming tire. The sky was still blue, the music still playing, and the wheel still turning as she lay flat against the rank pavement. Life is fleeting when you're a rat.
His favorite aunt loved antiques. All that dusty old crap given up by people who had had enough sense to get rid of it seemed to bring her immeasurable joy… He almost pitied her. But, “one man’s trash”, right? So he thought, this year, he’d put a little more effort than usual into choosing a birthday gift for her. Every year since he started making his own money, it’d been either a gift card, or one of those cheap department store beauty combo packs. With this year’s birthday steadily approaching, he hopped in his truck and drove a town over to Ray’s Antiques, deciding to scope the place out. He walked into the store and a little bell jingled overhead, signaling his entrance. An elderly woman with sparse white hairs atop her head and deep, patterned forehead wrinkles gave him a warm smile and nod from behind the counter. He sent a small, disingenuous smile in the woman’s direction, thinking to himself, “that must be one of the antiques”. He shook the thought away and started making his way through the store, perusing the strange objects and knick knacks that populated its shelves. There were all sorts of trinkets, kitschy stuff that he could see no use for. The smell of mahogany and some kind of essential oil or something permeated the air, making it harder than it already was for him to pick something out. “Maybe I should have just gone with the gift card,” he thought to himself. “All this stuff seems so unnecessary and obsolete.” He walked on past the last shelf to the very back of the store, and there, a tiny, emerald colored chest on the floor immediately caught his eye. A strange feeling washed over him; eerie and yet enticing at the same time. He glanced back at the shopkeeper, who was deeply engrossed in some notebook. Lowering his eyes towards the chest again as though drawn to it by some invisible magnetism, he reached a hand forward to open the single silver clasp that kept it shut. As his fingers latched around the clasp, the chest heaved and shuddered, dust blowing out in all directions from underneath its short, clawfoot legs. Not wanting to lose momentum, or maybe unable to, he popped the clasp open. He lifted the lid of the mysterious chest and warily but unwaveringly peeked inside. The moment he saw what the chest contained, he wished he’d never opened it…but it was too late now. There, he himself stood. A tiny version of himself in an exact replica of the store, a tiny hand on an almost microscopic green chest. It was unmistakable; there he was, in his puffy blue jacket, his faded black jeans, one hand on the little green chest. He jumped back in shock, knocking into the shelf behind him. “What the hell am I looking at?” he wondered, incredulously. His eyes were bulging out of his sockets and so he rubbed at them to quell them back into place. He glanced at the shopkeeper once more, who had not even looked up at the sound of impact his body had made as it flung into the furniture. Feeling slightly nauseous, he wobbled forward again and peeked into the chest. It’s four walls and floor were mirrors, reflecting only each other. It was empty. “I’m losing it,” he thought. “What is it with people and these essential oils?” He closed his eyes and took a deep breath. Opening them, he braved himself for another look into the chest, and his stomach dropped. There, both covered in and surrounded by various odds and ends, sat his aunt. Rocking away in a wooden rocking chair, tiny glasses resting on the bridge of her tiny nose. In her lap, she held a small, emerald green chest. He couldn’t believe what he was seeing. She rocked steadily, the bottoms of the chair nudging piles of mugs with corny sayings, painted figures, ceramic teapots - you name it. “Aunt Halle!! What are you doing in there?” he hissed. “Oh hi honey!” his shrunken aunt sang out, beaming up at him. “Dear me, I never thought I’d see you here! Come on down here and take a look at all this stuff! I found a plate with these cute little pink cows on it that I know you’d just adore.” “I-! I can’t get in there! I don’t even know how you got down there! And just a minute ago, I swear, I was looking at myself in the-…” he cut his sentence short. This was insane! He looked up from the chest and spun around himself wildly. He was suddenly face to face with the shopkeeper. She smiled, and for all the disdain he felt for the shop he couldn’t help but find comfort in interacting with someone his own size. “I see you’ve found the treasured reflections chest. Some people walk right by it,” she said to him in a warm, dreamy voice. “But…how? What is this?” he asked desperately, succumbing to mystery. “It is whatever you are. However you see things, how things are, for you. It changes all the time. And just as some people walk right past it, others peek inside it and find nothing. How curious.” “I just saw my aunt in there. She had hoarded so much crap… I guess… I guess that’s kind of where my head was at. I don’t know. She’s not really in there right? Am I in there?” he jabbered on worriedly. The shopkeeper chuckled and patted his arm, ambling slowly back to her desk. Just then, the shop shuddered as though an earthquake had come. He froze and gasped loudly as the top of the shop opened up and a big blue sky appeared before his eyes. Just as a massive hand crept in between the shop walls and headed straight for him, he woke up with a start in his own bed. Beads of sweat coated his forehead and it took him a few moments to orient himself to the familiarity of his bedroom. “That settles that,” he said aloud. “Definitely a gift card.”
“gavin, dinner!” gavin’s mom yelled. gavin had just climbed into the attic after hearing a weird thumping noise above his room. “coming!” he answered, walked towards the sound quicker. he clicked on the flashlight he had grabbed once the light from the hall wasn’t enough. the noise was getting louder as he moved farther into the attic. he finally spotted a chest sitting against the back wall. gavin took a step towards the chest when it suddenly started shaking violently. it only lasted a few seconds, but gavin was terrified. the chest was unlocked, so he raised the lid with a shaking hand. the moment he saw what the chest contained, he wished he’d never opened it…but it was too late now. the most hideous creature gavin had ever seen was writhing around in the box. it had no eyes, and it’s skin seemed to be entirely just brown slime. it had rows of spiked teeth and wings about two feet long. it screamed when gavin pointed his flashlight at it, and he slammed the box shut before it could escape. gavin quickly ran back to the attic door and climbed down. he was never going in the attic again.
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