I am 14 and new to writing. I am open to any suggestions about how to improve. I have a particular fascination with fantasy writing.
I am 14 and new to writing. I am open to any suggestions about how to improve. I have a particular fascination with fantasy writing.
“We are coming up on the planet of Zartho, General,” stated the Lieutenant standing next to the Captain, who was focused on piloting the ship. The General looked out of the window at the front of ship, seeing the large purple body coming up in front of them.
Then, the General told them, “Just don’t forget Zartho’s moons that go around the planet fast enough to cause serious damage if we collide ...
Elena knew she couldn’t stay in her city. Sure there were buildings tall enough to reach the heavens and so many people of all different types, but it was dying. Not many people could tell, as they were too enamored in one thing or another, but it was clear to Elena when she was above the city.
There was a huge plateau on the west side of the city. Many people kept away from the towering cliff, ...
Curses were well known to be cruel punishments throughout the land. The Evil Queen would use her magic mirror to send curses upon anyone she chose. The people lived in fear of crossing her and dealing with her curses.
The people knew nothing different though. The Queen had maintained a youthful glow about her for generations. She was also beautiful and lavish. She would tax the people and spend ...
Thunder struck in the distance. Lightning flashed. Leah shivered. Zeus was getting closer. Leah knew that she shouldn’t have listen to Eros when he came to her with his crazy scheme. She was going to take the fall for stealing Zeus’ lightning bolt. The punishment for such a thing would be an eternity in Tartarus. Leah did not want to go back to Tartarus, it was so dark and painful. She had been tr...
Linda smiled deviously as she looked in the mirror. Today was the day she would enact an intricate scheme she had made. She had a board with all sorts of sticky notes and yarn on it.
It was all because her two best friends had been in love with each other for a very long time, except neither of them could see it. Linda had heard the whole, they can never love me spiel, from both of them, and it...
The Golden Queen paced in front of her throne. She was enraged that her youngest sister the silver princess would betray her. Things were better for their kind since she had usurped their father. Their father hunted and killed anyone with magic, even if you were born with it. He had even killed his own wife, the one his daughters loved greatly. He didn’t know that his daughters had magic too, so h...
Miranda sat quietly in her chair, silent, as the law mandated (no woman is to talk unless spoken to). Her brother engaged in a political debate, and she internally sighed with longing for the ability to express an opinion, especially one that meant something. But society was completely against women, with their only purpose was to marry, have children, and care for the house. When her family was d...
“That orb has the power to see into the darkest parts of someone’s soul and bring it out.” Rosalie looked down at the orb in her hands with panic and threw it to her older brother.
He caught it from just instincts and yelled, “I don’t want it!” He then tossed it to his girlfriend, who happened to be across from him. She held her hands out to shield her face and it bounced off of her hands and la...