Writing Prompt

WRITING OBSTACLE

Inspired by Lou

Describe the colour of a character's soul.

You do not have to tell the reader who the character is; focus on description and metaphor.

Writings

Raven-Black Witches

There was something ancient about her. I’d known it since we met in the forest. She said she was just like me, but in her black eyes, some force churned. I didn’t like standing too close to her, I feared I might get pulled into her gravity.

But I kept coming back to the clearing. She was always there, perched on a rock or dangling from the crook of a tree branch. Sometimes crouched on the ground, poking a bug with a stick. She never looked up at me. Just knew I was there. And we talked sometimes, me about my village and her about her animal and tree friends, but other times we just sat together.

As I grew, she did too, but I swear it’s only because she wanted to. Slowly, we talked less about my village. It upset her. And one day I looked up, and she was laughing greatly at some joke I’d said, and she was a woman.

Another day, I asked her if she was a witch. All trace of levity left her.

“Would it be so bad if I was?”

“No, not at all, just-“

“I’m not a witch as much as a bear is not a man-eating monster, or a rat is not a bothersome nuisance. Witch is what your people call things like me. I would not be a witch if there were no men to call me witch, just as a bear would not eat men if there were none, just as a rat would not bother men if there were none.”

She spoke low, but her voice was filled with that darkness. Mine was trembling in my response

“But I’m a man, and I don’t call you witch. I call you friend. I only asked out of curiosity. I’m sorry.”

Her face softened, and something warmer crept into the black of her. A purple, maybe.

“I know. But don’t you ever listen to them when they speak of witches. Or you will find this clearing bare forever.”

I only nodded, and we sat until sunset, and I returned home.

The people I returned to began to feel like the other world, like my time with her was the only true time spent. They spoke of bad weather, poor crop, and when they’d get around to the tavern. Sometimes, my family would ask if I would get married soon. Other times they demanded that I hurry up and pick a girl before the good ones are gone. The same way farmers talk about prize cows. It disgusted me.

It was one of these nights, of feeling wretched at the dinner table with my father and mother and siblings, worn from the work of the day and worn from their demands, that an idea flew through my mind, like a bird past a window. A bare streak of a thought. What if I left here to go with her?

It grew in me like a seed. The hike to the clearing made me lighter and lighter. We lay together, on a fresh autumn morning, when I told her.

“I hate them. I know why you live here, among nature. Your life must be so full,” I said to her wistfully.

A flash of green crept into her dark presence.

“It is.” She looked out over the valley, the trilling of birds and rustling of animals echoing faintly, the ripple of reddened treetops in the playful wind.

“Could I ever be like you?” I said longingly.

“You could.” She returned her gaze to mine, and I felt that old fear of being pulled into her, but this time as a desire.

“What must I do?”

“Nothing. In form and action, we are already the same. If you are not home among the village, but here, then you are already like me.”

She sighed, a deep blue spreading over her.

“I was once a girl in a village. Just like you were a boy in a village. But they didn’t want me. They called me a witch-spawn, and cast me into the wilderness. And in the leaving, in the walking through the woods on bare, bloodied feet, I didn’t die like they thought I might. The forest became my village. Do you understand?”

I nodded, slowly. I told her I had to prepare, and she understood, and bade me farewell.

Most would write a note, saying they left to explore or marry a girl in another town, but I knew it wouldn’t work. So I went home, and I told them a truth in the way they would understand it, face to face. That my long walks were to see a powerful witch, and that we had lain together, and that I was leaving forever.

My father struck me in the face. He and my mother both cursed my name, saying I was always a strange boy and they always had hoped I would die out in the woods. A useless second son who couldn’t even marry well, and now he’s saing he’s in love with a witch. My elder brother had the honor of throwing me out the door and into the mud, with nothing more than the clothes on my back.

And I was lighter for it.

I trodded, weighed down by rain and filth but carried by hope, down the road out of the village. I didn’t go to the clearing. I simply left the path, and delved into the untamed forest.

The morning snuck across the sky silently, turning the night into a heavy gray. Silty mud sucked at my boots, sharp branches tore at my coat. This was the trial.

I learned much in those days. That the forest was not just the flowers and the gentle things. It was the blisters on my hands, the cutting cold, the ruthless pursuance of the mountain lion that stalked me. But I did not starve. I did not die.

And the blackness spread from the seed in me, that was planted so long ago. It wasn’t simply black, but blended with the hues of everything. Like raven feathers, I was a void that shone with every beautiful and horrible thing in the forest.

At the end of my changing, I was at the clearing, and she was there. Looking upon her darkness, and my own now calling back to it, is the sweetest homecoming I will ever feel. A warm yellow glow enveloped us, and we went into our forest, hand in hand as witch-lovers.