Writing Prompt

WRITING OBSTACLE

Depict a character's room that reflects their personality.

Try not to focus only on the things they have or display, but the features of their space that reflect something about their personality.

Writings

The Value Of Memories

“You kept it? After all these years?” Elodie gasped.

The messy, childish drawings were kept neatly in her friend’s dresser. The staples that kept them together in a picture book were still intact.

Penelope nodded. “It was the first handmade gift I’d ever received. I didn’t have the heart to get rid of something that was made with love, even if you weren’t the greatest artist back then.”

The scribbles of green for the grass, the yellow circle in the corner for the sun, the black stick figures for the people in the short story. The rainbow words narrated what happened in these pictures, telling the story of two friends having a play date.

Penelope grinned. “I’ve kept many more things than that.”

She pointed a finger upwards. The blue ceiling was adorned with origami hearts organized in rainbow order. Elodie stared in awe.

“I made those for Valentine’s Day in fifth grade,” Elodie said.

Penelope nodded.

“Why have you kept all these things? Especially after we…” Elodie paused, gathering herself, “after we fell out.”

Penelope sensed the sadness gathering in Elodie’s soul. The fallen bridge between them had only just begun its reconstruction. Recollections of past actions remained in their minds, like stubborn rubble. The heated arguments replayed every so often like a broken record.

“Because what we had was wonderful…” Penelope whispered, smiling wistfully, as if being whisked away back to the years of their undeniable bond.

“You truly believe that?” Eloise doubted. A lump forms in her throat.

“I have never lied to you, Ellie. And I am not lying to you now.”

Silence followed. The comfortable kind that settled inbetween the shelves of a library.

The kind that brought people closer.

Cold and Pink

The Detective steps into her apartment, his senses heightened. His eyes catch a pair of black gloves, neatly rolled black handwraps, and a black mouthguard, all inside a large black sports bag by the entrance. The sight sends a shiver down his spine, hinting at a suspect who is intimidating, perhaps even dangerous. A woman who might engage in bar fights, not out of necessity, but for the thrill. He makes his way into the kitchen. It’s light, rather minimalistic, and a bit too empty for his taste. As he opens the fridge, he finds some broccoli, salmon, and tuna. He opens the Cupboards and finds nothing but vegan protein, some rice, and pasta. This woman must be skinny as hell, he thinks for himself. He is saying a silent prayer, thankful for his wife, who is always stocking up the kitchen inventory. What a nightmare it must be to be with a woman so unprepared for the most basic human urges, such as eating.

The apartment feels cold and impersonal. As he walks into the living room, he finds a glass table with three chairs, some dumbbells, and a black couch without any blankets or decorative cushions. There are no photographs and no cosy furniture. The room is well-lit, and the wooden, light-beige floor removes some of the frosty feeling he felt when entering the hallway and kitchen before. He wonders if the suspect might be one of those women who denies herself everything.

He walks further into yet another hallway and sees three more rooms: the bathroom, the office, and the bedroom. He gazes into the office and is surprised by the abundance of books in this room. To his surprise, there were many pink books: "The History of Fashion," "Audrey Hepburn," and "How to be a Diva." He shrugs his shoulders. He has been a detective for twenty years and is still amazed by the personality clues he finds in other people's homes.

Finally, the bedroom. He isn’t surprised by its sterile nature anymore; it has one bed, a giant wardrobe, and a night table. He is curious about the clothes, and upon opening the wardrobe, his jaw drops. This isn’t the cold-blooded, bar fight gal he assumed. This is a lady! Pink petticoats, red and black A-Line dresses, White Jumpsuits, and giant black hats, Audrey Hepburn style. WHO is this lady?