Writing Prompt
WRITING OBSTACLE
Each time they sneeze, your character loses a fraction of their eyesight.
Write a descriptive story or poem about this scenario - how would the character's world change?
Writings
See Less, See More
I see more when I look,
I see less when I don’t.
It’s even worse when I sneeze,
I can’t recall what took forth.
The days pass by as the river in the stream,
flows softly and slowly past by the drawing sun to the trees.
I missed out on the moments,
I will never get back.
I now watch with open eyes,
until my very last dance....
On His Own Terms
The young man carefully negotiated the aisle and stepped off the bus. He regarded the graffiti on the concrete buildings lining the street, neon colors and soft, bubble letters, ghetto murals he admired every evening as he walked home. He adjusted the glasses that framed his hazel eyes, making sure they sat securely over the mask covering his nose and mouth. The sky was aglow, broad pink and or...
Oh Lover, Forgive Me
Oh, lover
please forgive me.
For
when I look at you,
I can no longer look at you the same.
Your eyes were once so adoring
but they are something
I am no longer faithfully exploring.
I cannot gaze at you
as I have before
but know
you are something I still adore.
I, still
can envision
all the hues in your eyes;
a holy temple to my soul.
Oh,
so lover
forgive me.
...
Beauty Gone
Sight holds beauty
Youth let’s eyes see
And yet, one will lose sight
With every sneeze
A fraction of beauty is gone
The picture of the world slowly fades
Allergies are the worse
Images and colors no longer standout
The world is a blur for one with decreasing sight
Slight may not return
Age diminishes the eyes
But beauty can be found with the other senses...
Blinding
My sight gets worse each time I sneeze
Father God will you help me please
I used to see all the outlines
Of flowers and a squirrel that climbs
The doctor said that there’s no cure
I’ll do some research that’s for sure
Medical journals never end
A science teacher is my friend
Oh I don’t want to lose my sight
I’ll take meds but money is tight
Allergies must not come to play
I’ll stay inside we...
Sightless
Everything was so clear
Bright blues and dark greens
Flowers and clouds and trees
I could see everything
And then I sneezed
Lines weren't as sharp
Colors beginning to fade
Things were still discernible
But it wasn't quite so clear
And then I sneezed
The fading got worse
Everything was gray
Shapes were still there
Yet it wasn't what I knew
And then I sneezed
Black just black
No colors no shapes
...
Tell Me What To Do
Whisps of white smoke twisted and circled up into the air from the cauldron. The black liquid bubbled, and Asa leant over her concoction, the smell of liquorice and sage stinging the back of her throat.
Coughing the smoke from her face, Asa fumbled behind for her stool and took a seat, the tips of her toes skimming the stone floor.
A scattering of manuscripts littered the dark wooden table, eac...
Sneezing Season
Allergy season was a real drag because 1) red puffy eyes were NOT a cute look and 2) it brought me closer to the dark never-ending abyss of darkness. Or really, it brought me closer to blindness.
As someone who was perpetually prone to horrible seasonal allergies and hay fever, it seemed a lot safer to just stay indoors than to leave my nest and risk blindness. You see, as a rather unfortunate d...
All I Ask Is That You Let Me Down Easily
Disclaimer: I chose to edit the prompt from "sneezing" to "waking up" and the character loses eye sight throughout the day but it is completely fine the next morning…
Here we are, the morning again. The mornings are always the best, I can see her.
I can see her luxurious hair, flowing in plaits behind her ears. Her warm eyes, which wrap my heart in knots every time they open. Her freckles fadin...